After enjoying a fantastic weekend with long term friends who moved away 3 years ago, life seemed wonderful. The weekend was then backed up by my boss allowing me to work from home on Monday which meant I achieved getting a tonne of work done! YIP YEW!! But alas, the delayed Monday blues moved to Tuesday and I spent my morning pushing my two little sloths to get out of bed, into school clothes, bags packed, breakfast in mouths and heading to school on time…. haha I crack myself up sometimes! I was not on time!
While at work all I could think about was jumping on peerwise and reviewing my draft assignment one. Yes I’m hooked! The day finally came to an end and I think I have definitely spent over the recommended amount of time on my assignment step 1 draft but thanks to so many people cheering me on and providing feedback I have got draft 2 below.
One piece of advice that I read often in peoples comments on other blogs was read your words out loud to check that it sounds okay. By doing this I believe I have fixed more errors than I realised that I had so thank you everyone! Of course if you have time I am keen to have more feedback as we are 1 week away from due date 🙂
Sarah Zillmann Assignment Stage 1 DRAFT 2
For those who are interested I have also included a photo of my two little sloths.
Hi Sarah,
Great job! I love all the self expression you’ve put in there and I think you have managed to address the key concepts very well.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Chantelle! I’m no expert but I think we have all done a great job on this one.
LikeLike
Wow Sarah. You had me reading your assignment like a novel, see not only Martin can do it. You brought up a lot of points that struck a note with me in the study guides and I could really relate to them. I think you have done a great job with this assignment and I can’t criticise anything.
Would you mind having a look at mine if you have a change as I would love some feedback.
https://aengelbrechtblog.wordpress.com/2017/03/07/draft-of-assignment-as1-step-1/
Thank you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aw thank you 🙂 I will check yours out right now.
LikeLike
Hi Sarah, great blog and assignment! Your assignment is well written and easy to relate to 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Danielle 🙂 I will check yours out too!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Sarah, I really appreciate it 😄
LikeLiked by 1 person
It looks fab Sarah! You are doing a great job, I think you are inspiring a few more people then you think 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh thank you, I can only hope to help 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, I really enjoyed your assignment, I am afraid mine is far from even the first draft but I enjoyed reading yours and how you are feeling and reacting to what we are learning. I am finding the blog and workings of how to link into everything quite a challenge but getting there slowly and will be fine once I get my head around it all. I am progressing because I at least have worked out how to follow you so progress is being made. Once again thanks for the great read
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hi Stacey, thank you 🙂 I am more than happy to read your draft and help you if you want? I’m also working on my blog it’s a whole new world to me. I bet your draft is fantastic just remember to believe in yourself x
LikeLike
Well done again!! I will learn a lot from you!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks ! I hope I can help 🙂
LikeLike
Pingback: Top 3 Blogs | Sarah Z's blog